That is beautiful and well looked on paper / screen, it must first be logical to stay in the head author of the project. In the description of the project must be strictly ordered and consistent, logical purpose of escaping the problem, and then successive appearance of tasks, a clear vision of the results. Be sure to describe the ratio of the project is justified when the potential risks.
For clarity, it can be placed schematically, in the form of tables, drawing on a sheet of paper; there just on a whim will be new relationships, arrows, possibly with some visual inspection criteria will be irrelevant and will disappear by themselves.
When the initial action plan will be ready, you can safely proceed to the text description. The style of presentation will depend on the direction of the scope of the design. Completely different description of a social project aimed at raising the civic engagement of the population and, say, the effective management of banking operations. But in all descriptions poorly perceived dry, laconic, overly intellectual phrases. Not welcome and excessive pathos by the author as the savior of the whole world. Even to attract the attention of the Commission, which assesses the work, do not resort to excessive emotionality.
It suffices to find in its draft some zest and build on this one unique aspect. Simply put - the competence and professionalism in any project will not cover problems width, and depth, thorough knowledge and understanding of a specific parameter, the change is directed and your project.
But it does happen that a person just does not make friends with a simple description and expression of their thoughts. Here, you can resort to literary professionals or people who are not just engaged in drafting or editing project. However, do not forget that you can trust only "combing" of the text, without giving control over the ideas of the author.